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By Dave Kelly

Thursday, December 18, 2025

Eli and the Feeling Everyone Trusts

 

Eli and the Feeling Everyone Trusts

(Book 4)



Chapter 1

The Story Everyone Knows


The class was quieter than usual.

Ms. Calder stood at the front of the room with her hands folded. “Before we start,” she said, “I need to tell you something.”

A student in another class had been caught cheating on a test.

There were murmurs, then silence.

Ms. Calder went on. “We’re going to talk about what to do when someone makes a mistake.”

Eli felt the room lean forward, listening.



Chapter 2

The Feeling Arrives First


Almost immediately, someone spoke.

“That must have been really embarrassing,” Mia said.

Others nodded.

“It would be awful if everyone knew,” someone added.

“It’s not like they hurt anyone,” Jonah said. “They were probably scared.”

The room filled with a warm, shared feeling. Understanding. Sympathy. Relief at not being the one caught.

Eli noticed it carefully.

The feeling came fast. Faster than thought.



Chapter 3

A Simple Proposal


Jonah raised his hand. “We shouldn’t say anything about it. People should just forget.”

Several heads nodded.

“It’s kinder,” Mia said. “Everyone deserves a second chance.”

The feeling in the room grew stronger.

Eli felt it too. He didn’t like the idea of someone being embarrassed. He didn’t like the idea of making things worse.

But something else arrived quietly underneath the feeling.



Chapter 4

What the Light Shows


The small light inside Eli didn’t flare or insist.

It simply showed him something steady.

Pretending nothing happened would not be right.

Not because the student deserved punishment.

 Not because rules had to be enforced.

 But because something real had happened, and ignoring it would twist it into something else.

Eli felt the pull of the room press against that knowing.



Chapter 5

Kind Isn’t Always Right


Eli raised his hand.

“We shouldn’t pretend it didn’t happen,” he said.

The room went still.

Mia frowned. “Why would you want to make it worse?”

“I don’t,” Eli said. “But acting like nothing happened isn’t honest.”

Jonah shook his head. “That’s harsh.”

The word stung more than Eli expected.



Chapter 6

When Warmth Pushes Back


The room shifted.

People weren’t angry. They were disappointed.

“That just feels mean,” someone said.

“It doesn’t feel right,” another added.

Eli listened.

The feeling in the room was strong. Stronger than in any argument he’d been part of before.

But the light didn’t move.

He noticed that carefully.



Chapter 7

Choosing Without Applause


“I’m not saying we should shame them,” Eli said. “But pretending it didn’t happen isn’t the same as being kind.”

No one answered.

Ms. Calder watched, expression unreadable.

The discussion moved on.

Eli felt exposed, like he’d stepped into cold air.



Chapter 8

After the Warmth


At lunch, people were polite.

No one argued with Eli. No one agreed with him either.

Someone said, “You’re really serious about stuff.”

Eli nodded. He wasn’t sure what that meant.

The warm feeling from earlier was gone. What remained was quieter—and heavier.



Chapter 9

What Feels Right


That night, Eli thought about the discussion.

He replayed the looks. The word harsh. The sense that he’d broken something gentle.

He also noticed something else.

The knowing he’d felt hadn’t come from coldness. It hadn’t come from wanting to punish.

It had come before all that.

And it was still there.



Chapter 10

Not the Same Thing


The next day, someone said, “You don’t care about feelings.”

Eli stopped.

“That’s not true,” he said. “I just don’t think feelings decide what’s right.”

The words surprised him. He hadn’t planned them.

They felt accurate.



Final Chapter

Steady

The class moved on.

The story faded. Another topic took its place.

Eli watched the room return to normal.

The world kept trusting the feeling it knew best.

Inside, Eli trusted something quieter.

The feeling passed.

The light stayed.


The End




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