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By Dave Kelly

Monday, December 15, 2025

Eli and the Hard Choice

I’ve started a short series of chapter books for strong 9–11 readers.


Book 1



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Eli and the Hard Choice



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Chapter 1


The Crowd


The hallway filled faster than usual.


People poured out of classrooms, voices rising, backpacks bumping, bodies moving together as if pulled by the same rope. Eli was carried along for a few steps before he stopped.


The hallway did not stop.


Someone brushed past him. Another shoulder clipped his arm. The crowd flowed around him and kept going.


Eli stood still for a moment, then stepped aside.


Later, in class, he opened his notebook and rewrote a sentence he didn’t like. He pressed harder the second time, slowed his hand, and watched the letters settle into place.


That worked.


The hallway hadn’t.


Eli noticed that difference and didn’t forget it.



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Chapter 2


The Pause


Group work meant shared answers.


Everyone knew that. Ms. Calder didn’t need to repeat it.


By the time they reached the last question, the table was tired and restless. Chairs scraped. Someone tapped a pencil against the desk.


“It’s B,” Jonah said. He sounded sure. “Look at the example.”


Two others nodded immediately.


Eli read the question again.


Then the pause came.


Not hesitation. Not confusion.


Space.


He could go along.

He could argue.

He could say nothing and let it happen.


No one pushed him.


The pause waited.



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Chapter 3


Knowing Without Proof


Eli didn’t need to work it out again.


B was wrong.


The answer sat in his mind the way a weight sits on a scale—already settled.


“It’s C,” Eli said.


Jonah turned. “Why?”


Eli opened his mouth, then closed it. He didn’t have a reason that would sound good.


“I just know,” he said.


Jonah laughed. “That’s not how school works.”


But the knowing didn’t move.



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Chapter 4


Agreement


The others leaned in.


“B matches the pattern.”

“C feels off.”

“We’re wasting time.”


Someone took the pencil.


Eli watched their faces. They weren’t trying to cheat. They weren’t trying to be unfair.


They were just agreeing.


And still, the answer inside him didn’t change.


“I’m not agreeing to B,” Eli said.


The pencil paused, then erased C anyway.


“Everyone else agrees,” Jonah said. “That’s how this works.”


Eli didn’t answer.


He felt the line form—quiet, clear—between him and the group.



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Chapter 


After


At lunch, no one sat near him.


It wasn’t loud or obvious. It was small things. Seats taken. Conversations angled away. Jokes that didn’t reach him.


Eli ate and listened.


Standing alone didn’t feel dramatic. It felt thin.


That night, he replayed the moment when the pencil erased C.


He hadn’t stopped it.


Something didn’t line up.



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Chapter 6


When Error Becomes Clear**


The worksheets came back the next day.


The answer was wrong.


No one spoke.


Eli felt it settle—not satisfaction, not relief—but confirmation. The misfit he’d felt before now had a shape.


During quiet work time, Eli stood and walked to the front of the room.


“We changed the answer after we decided,” he said.


Ms. Calder looked at him for a long moment, then nodded.


“Thank you,” she said.


Nothing else happened.



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Chapter 7


The Cost Stays


The group lost the point.


Jonah didn’t look at Eli for the rest of the day.


At recess, someone said, “You didn’t have to say anything.”


Eli nodded. That part was true.


The cost didn’t disappear.

But the misfit did.


Inside, things were steady again.



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Chapter 8


No One Explains It


That night, Eli sat at his desk and tried to write about what had happened.


He crossed out sentences that sounded fake.


In the end, he wrote only this:


> Some things don’t change, even when everyone else agrees.




He stared at it.


It felt finished.



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Chapter 9


Again


A week later, a different group. A different assignment.


Someone suggested an answer too quickly.


The pause came again.


So did the silence.


Eli felt the familiar weight—the cost, the space, the steadiness underneath it.


He spoke.


The room moved on.


Eli stayed where he was.



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The End



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