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Thursday, October 08, 2026

DTI Run — The Object of Shame v0.2 — Version 1.1


DTI Run — The Object of Shame v0.2 — Version 1.1

Theoretical foundations: Grant C. Sterling (Eastern Illinois University). Analysis and synthesis: Dave Kelly. Prose rendering: Claude (Anthropic). 2026.

Instrument: The Derivation Trace Instrument (DTI) v0.3.

Step 0 — Halt and Input Restatement

Document under trace. “The Object of Shame — A Core Stoic Reply on Shame and the Ruin of Self-Government” v0.2, the rendered fragment. The linked post now carries v0.3.

Thesis, from the document. “What has gone missing is the thing shame is about.”

Unit. Whole-document run. The document’s Sources, Declared Gaps and Version Note are part of the text under trace, so support named there counts.

Self-audit. The thesis is located in the text. Nothing supplied.

Step 1 — Proposition Extraction

77 propositions. 11 sentences are excluded as rhetorical or illustrative. 4 are recorded as the document’s own namings and declarations. Each proposition is shown with its type from Step 2: F Foundational, D Derived, E Empirical, Def Definitional, R Restatement. The numbering follows the run on v0.1, with four additions, marked new or corrected.

Opening.

  • 1–3. Kang’s question; the familiar answer; both have failed in America (E).
  • 4. The thesis (D).

The Beginning.

  • 5. Every argument ends in propositions too basic to be argued for (F, C4).
  • 6. So an honest argument states them (D).
  • 7–10. Good and evil are real; they are known directly; a judgment is true when it matches the fact; a man’s assent is his own (F: C6, C3, C5, C2).
  • 11. Only virtue is good and only vice is evil (F, Th10).
  • 12. Nothing outside a man’s control is good or evil (D, Core Stoicism lines 11–12).
  • 13. Only a man’s beliefs and will are in his control (F, Th6).
  • 14. Desire follows from what we judge good or evil (F, Th7).
  • 15. Feeling follows from the judgment we assent to (presented as a premise; Sterling’s post of 20 June 2018).
  • 16. The argument below derives from these (D, the claim under test).

What Shame Is.

  • 17. Shame follows from a judgment we assent to (D).
  • 18. By correspondence, that judgment is true or false (D).
  • 19. By the tenth theorem, it is false when I am ashamed of an indifferent (D).
  • 20. The act is past and cannot be chosen again (Def; new wording).
  • 21. Vice is an act of will (R).
  • 22. By the sixth theorem, my will is in my control (R; new).
  • 23. The only act of will still open to me is the next (D).
  • 24. What rightly follows is caution about that one (D).
  • 25. The ancient Stoics classed the two words (E).
  • 26. The definitions of aischunē and aidōs (Def).
  • 27. Most modern writing blends the two (E).
  • 28. That blending is the whole problem (D).

Why Audience-Shame Fails.

  • 29. Its force depends entirely on the audience (D).
  • 30. Divide the audience and you divide the shame (D).
  • 31. The Pew figures (E).
  • 32. America has two audiences; audience-shame split (E).
  • 33. A powerful man can always find another audience (E).
  • 34. Whoever commands a crowd is beyond audience-shame by definition (D).

Why Realist Shame Holds.

  • 35. That he did wrong is true whether or not anyone saw it (D).
  • 36. The next act is his alone to choose (D).
  • 37. Such shame binds by a common object (D).
  • 38. It checks power, because a fact does not depend on power (D).

The Objection.

  • 39. On Sterling’s account of impressions, to hold something true is to assent to it (D).
  • 40–41. Assent is free; an impression can be refused or accepted (R).
  • 42. Accept it, and shame follows the external (D).
  • 43. Both audiences have made that one judgment (E).
  • 44. Their quarrel is a single error made in two directions (D).
  • 45. It tells against realism no more than a wrong sum tells against arithmetic (D).
  • 46. Each person can correct it alone (D).

What Democracy Borrows.

  • 47. A people governs itself only so far as it can hold to account those who act for it (presented as the document’s own premise; new).
  • 48. That relies on premises it seldom states (D).
  • 49–52. The four glosses (R).
  • 53. What it is to hold a man to account (Def, by ruling R-2026-10-08-09, where it is numbered 51).
  • 54. Each of those is one of the four (D).
  • 55. Remove them and accountability has nothing to grip (D).
  • 56. Together the denials make shame impossible (D).

The Defense.

  • 57. Public shaming is audience-shame at higher volume (D).
  • 58. It has already failed (E).
  • 59. The remedy is to restore the object of shame, one rational faculty at a time (D).
  • 60. That is the aim of the corpus I keep (E, the author’s own statement).
  • 61–63. The three disciplines (R).
  • 64. To sign is to own the assent (Def).
  • 65. Shame follows only from a judgment someone has assented to (R).
  • 66. To be wrong is to assent to what is false (Def; new).
  • 67. An assertion nobody has assented to has no one who could be wrong about it, and so no one rightly ashamed (D).
  • 68. Stating the beginning and the audit answer to foundationalism (D; corrected).
  • 69. The signature answers to free will and to correspondence truth (D; corrected).
  • 70. A citizen who keeps them answers for his own assents (D).
  • 71. That is the ground aidōs, or the beginnings of it, stands on (D).
  • 72. The crowd’s opinion is an external, so aischunē has no true judgment behind it (D).

No Compromise.

  • 73. Procedure without truth is only a contest, and tolerance without good and evil is only indifference (D).
  • 74. That settlement is what failed (E).
  • 75. The judgment behind shame is true or false (R).
  • 76. A people who forget this have lost the means to govern themselves (D).
  • 77. The cure is judgment of good and evil that does not depend on the powerful (D).

Self-audit. Joining sentences into single propositions is the auditor’s consolidation. No claim is added.

Step 2 — Type Assignment

  • Foundational: 10 (5, 7–11, 13, 14, 15, 47).
  • Derived: 37.
  • Empirical: 12 (1, 2, 3, 25, 27, 31, 32, 33, 43, 58, 60, 74).
  • Definitional: 5 (20, 26, 53, 64, 66).
  • Restatement: 13 (21, 22, 40, 41, 49–52, 61–63, 65, 75).

Self-audit. Propositions 15 and 47 are typed as the document presents them, as premises. Both go to Step 6.

Step 3 — Upward Trace

  • Located at named premises (14): 12, 17, 18, 19, 35, 36, 37, 38, 39, 42, 44, 46, 72, 77.
  • Located internally (22): 4, 6, 23, 24, 28, 29, 30, 34, 45, 48, 54, 55, 56, 57, 59, 67, 68, 69, 70, 71, 73, 76.
  • Unlocatable: none.

Proposition 16 is the claim under test and is answered by the trace as a whole.

Self-audit. Propositions 48 and 76 are located at 47 because the text now states it. It was not supplied by the auditor.

Step 4 — Downward Trace

  • 17 carries 18, 19, 42, 56, 65 and 67.
  • 47 carries 48 and 76.
  • 53 carries 54, 55 and 48.
  • 32 and 43 carry the thesis (4).
  • Decoration: 1 and 25.

Self-audit. Nothing supplied.

Step 5 — Substitution Test

All Located propositions are confirmed: removing the support falsifies each. The four soft joints recorded in the run on v0.1 are closed.

  • The sixth theorem. It is now cited for what it says (22). The step to the next act runs from 20, 21 and 22 to 23, and removing any one of them falsifies 23.
  • Self-government. The missing premise is stated at 47. Removing it falsifies 48 and 76.
  • Being wrong. 66 is stated before 67, and removing it falsifies 67.
  • The pairing. 68 and 69 each give their ground in the sentence.

Loosened: 73. Removing 55 leaves it standing as a bare assertion, so it leaves the Derived set.

Stabilized Derived set: 36. Unlocatable: 0.

Self-audit. Nothing supplied.

Step 6 — Foundation Guard

  • Titled: 5 and 7–11 (the commitments and Th10). 13 and 14 (Th6 and Th7) hold the base under v0.3.
  • Protected claim: 15. It rests on a Sterling post and not on a theorem, as the document declares.
  • Protected claim: 47. It is the document’s own premise, outside the base, as the document declares. The section “What Democracy Borrows” rests on it.

Self-audit. Nothing supplied.

Step 7 — Empirical Gate

  • Source declared: 1 (unopened, as the document declares), 31, 60.
  • Partly sourced: 32. It rests on 31, and the document declares that the survey does not measure shame.
  • Source named, unopened: 25.
  • No source, declared as gaps: 2, 3, 27, 33, 43, 58, 74.

Flagged prominently. The thesis runs through 43, which has no source. “As I observe them” does not satisfy the gate (R-2026-10-08-03). 27 carries 28, 33 carries part of the paragraph that holds 34, and 58 carries half of 59.

Self-audit. Nothing supplied.

Step 8 — Roll-Up

  • Propositions: 77.
  • Foundational: 10, of which 2 are protected claims.
  • Derived: 36 in the stabilized set. Loosened: 1.
  • Empirical: 12, of which 7 have no source.
  • Definitional: 5. Restatement: 13.
  • Decoration: 2.
  • Ratio: 0 of 36 Unlocatable. No HALT.

Verdict: Partially Traced. Every derivation the essay claims is performed and survives substitution. Between this and Traced stand 43 (unsourced, under the thesis), six other empirical claims without source, the Loosened 73, and two protected claims, one of which carries a section.

Rulings on This Run

Ruled by Dave Kelly on 8 October 2026 and entered in the Ruling Register as R-2026-10-08-10.

  • Proposition 20 (“the act itself is past and cannot be chosen again”) stands as Definitional. It carries 23.
  • Proposition 66 (“To be wrong is to assent to what is false”) stands as Definitional. It carries 67.
  • The verdict, Partially Traced, is accepted.

Outside the Instrument

  • The Political Application Constraint. v0.2 complies with the Constraint as qualified (R-2026-10-08-07). Its one political premise (47) is declared as the document’s own and not Sterling’s.
  • The skeleton. R-2026-10-08-06 says “The Beginning comes first.” The essay opens with a paragraph ahead of that section.
  • A stale gap. The essay’s Declared Gaps says the Ruling Register “was not opened for this document.” The Register was opened for this run, and the three rulings on aidōs read as the essay quotes them.

Sources

Declared Gaps

  • Not opened: the Stoic News posts the essay links, among them Sterling’s post of 20 June 2018; Kang’s article; Seddon’s Glossary; Diogenes Laertius.
  • The Nine Excerpts file carries no date for §7. That the account of impressions is the post of 20 June 2018 rests on the essay’s own citation.
  • The linked post carries v0.3 of the essay, not the v0.2 traced here. Its version note says v0.3 makes one change, to the Declared Gaps entry on the Ruling Register, and leaves the essay’s wording unchanged. v0.3 was not opened in full and was not traced.
  • The instrument sets no threshold between Traced and Partially Traced. The verdict is the auditor’s reading, accepted by the operator.
  • The run does not assess truth, style or doctrinal agreement. The notes under “Outside the Instrument” are not findings of the trace.

Version Note

Version 1.1 supersedes Version 1.0. The essay is linked to its Stoic News post at Step 0 and in Sources, and the Declared Gaps entry on the missing link is replaced by one recording that the post now carries v0.3. Nothing else is changed.

Version 1.0: first rendered version. The run was drafted, ruled on and ratified on 8 October 2026. In rendering, self-audit lines were added at Steps 1, 4, 6 and 7, where the draft carried none; the proposition numbers of each type were listed at Step 2; the ground of the Loosened finding was stated at Step 5; and the rulings were recorded with their Register number. No finding, count or verdict is changed.

Theoretical foundations: Grant C. Sterling (Eastern Illinois University). Analysis and synthesis: Dave Kelly. Prose rendering: Claude (Anthropic). 2026.

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